Sunday, February 6, 2011

FICTION SHORT: Throb (Erotic Horror)


I love writing horror fiction and erotic horror fiction. With all this nonfiction book writing, I'm giving myself a bit of time each week to write a horror short that is under 1000 words. This one today is under 500 and an erotic horror piece. There will be another one on Wednesday that will thrill and delight. Be certain you are mature enough to read this. If not, you are learning about sex in entirely the wrong blog unless you plan to have paranormal encounters.

Skin met skin, tacky, moist, heated deeply from within. Undulating against the damp sheets, their bodies met, thrust for thrust in a cadence born from a united goal to seek the thrill.

She coaxed him in soft whispering tones against his sensitive ear. This accompanied a throaty laugh at the challenge and the quest was on. With a staccato of deep thrusts, he made her mood turn in an instant. Now, her nails dug into his ridges of his shoulder blades and then punctured his flesh without his notice. Singularly concentrating on the throb of his shaft and the need to release, the man studied her dark eyes, searching for a sign that she was trembling on the brink.

The woman gasped, arched against him until the moisture of their bodies created a delightful suction. He felt it then, a tightening spasm as she clung to his aching flesh. He bent to her neck, settling his mouth against her skin, biting playfully and then more painfully at the throb of her pulse.

The tremble in her breathing gave him the sign as he bruised her flesh with his teeth and then picked up his cadence. The woman threw her head back helplessly, completely vulnerable to his domination. He lifted his head and studied her expression of bliss as he felt himself rising to the moment, knowing it would be the longest most potent climax of his entire existence.

Then she put her mouth to his throat, nibbling, licking, teasing and whimpering in a soft plead for the hot wash of him within her swollen folds. He threw back his head as the conqueror as he stiffened and spent himself.

Her teeth pleasurably nipped at the pulse in his neck and he grunted in torture and pleasure as her teeth penetrated the flesh, crushing the artery, his hot seed pumping from his body as his hot blood drained from his neck.

Dizzy with a protracted climax, his arms grew weak, his body became cold, his climax petered out, replaced by the warm arousing feeling of blood being sucked masterfully from his body. His heart beat slowed, his breathing quieted as he collapsed atop of her.

She dominated him now, seated atop of him like a wild thing, drinking desperately from his life blood, draining him of all of his life at once. His body satisfied and spent, he sank back into the soft folds of his death bed and gave in to the greatest of releases.

22 comments:

  1. Hey stop peeking in my window.

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  2. Hey, if that's true, you should be dead by now, dude. Or perhaps undead???

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  3. I'm not usually into erotic fiction (all that 'his purple man-root became a geyser, bursting to glaze her face like a donut'), but I like how you built it up to the climax of death. In a way, that was very poetic.

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  4. Cullan;
    Thanks. My use of erotica and horror together has more to do with the build up to climax and the denouement. The world of the erotic is as forbidden as the world of raw horror and yet both very much a part of the animal side of man. A marriage that works if used properly and you will definitely not be hearing of man-roots and facial glazing and I'm just so thankful, buddy, that you write amazing horror fiction and nonfiction and stay away from the erotic. Hee hee--glazed donut, indeed!

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  5. Yeah, I don't think I could write erotica to save my life. It's best to concentrate on our strengths. :-D

    Somehow, I thought you'd get a kick out of my turn of phrase there.

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  6. Oh, and on the latest Poll, I haven't seen the UFO, but the others are applicable. I'm B, C, and D.

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  7. that would be chapter 2

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  8. Haha. Yeah, Damn! Cullan, you've seriously seen the paranormal. You need a UFO dude. I've seen 3 of them so far and full-body, had my toe pulled, my hair pulled, my clothes tugged on (and no, that was not on a date). I'd have to say the one that really threw me the most was the full body because it was brief but he stared right at me and his position he was standing in was so awkward and stilted. It was like something out of a freaking Japanese movie.

    Barry, perhaps I need to do another scene when the man has changed over to undead.

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  9. alternating erotic stories or dueling eros? hmmmmm?

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  10. Is erotic fiction a novel way to a woman's heart?

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  11. HN;
    I warned you bud. This is not the place to be getting your knowledge of sex unless you're a werewolf or vampire, then this is standard reading.

    Barry;
    "Play on words -- advanced course." You must teach it, professor.

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  12. another one for your collection

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  13. You know, this short wouldn't be bad for the anthology I'm working on, but those stories are a bit longer. Perhaps I could elongate this one. Good idea. I hadn't done the vampire story yet or the shapeshifter or the ghost sex one yet. Those are the last stories left for "Philia." I hope to put that one out maybe this fall with illustrations.

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  14. Love at first bite...What woman never fantisized about necking with a vampire? What about having one gallantly kiss your hand and in the process, nibble at your wrist?

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  15. Echo;
    Yes, the teeth on the neck--any woman will tell you, that has an instant communication to the womb. I think it always opens the gate for the man wishing to enter.

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  16. What a way to go - and so nicely described!

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  17. I loved the phrase: "HIS CLIMAX PETERED OUT."
    That was a killer!!!

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  18. Timoteo;
    I'm not without a bit of levity when writing. It was just too perfect there. Glad it amused, buddy.

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  19. Timoteo is one of my favorite bloggers. He's a clever writer. I always look forward to his wit.

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